MY FUNNY ILLUSIONS
Illusions and decisions, we are surrounded by all.
Trapped in an alien world
we all stay strong.
Every time we close our eyes, we dive in paradise;
for we all follow our dark fantasies.
Why do we stay strong?;
When all we want is to live in a place where Gods holiday,
when we wish to walk down the streets of divine grandeur and compassion,
when we know we belong to the garden of clarity.
Illusions and decisions, we are surrounded by all
Roaming under the dim city moonlight
we all seek rays of love.
Every time we close our eyes, the soul dies and lips turn blank;
for we all desire the realms of heaven.
Why do we live in black?;
When all we want is to colour our hearts in a rainbow,
when we wish to indulge in the green flavours of sea and sand,
when we know our souls doesn't belong here.
And we stay strong!
It seems that you write very positive things with shades of black in it, what I mean is that you look like a positive person, but have somehow surrounded people who are selfish or don't value your emotions. But anyways you write good and maybe you have tried a bit to express what you want and where you are now? Somewhere down the second verse you have shown that you are very optimistic and want to live in solitude. If that is the case then you are already there, just search within you. Look for the rainbow colors...
ReplyDeleteAll in all... I loved the poem. Keep doing the good work.
Thank you for such wise criticism. It always motivates me as a writer and a person and make me strive to write things beyond the ordinary. Indeed as humans we do seek solitude at some point in time, and its important as well to introspect and seek inner freedom and peace.
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